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Last week, I happened to cross with my church priest in somewhere outside our church.  He was one the very few guys who could have a religion and some independent thinking concurrently.  I admired him a lot.  

He asked me why I went to his church less and less recently.  Actually I was busy, I needed to work out my living expenses, plus it was the assignment period.  Nevertheless I highlighted I did not like to hear during Sunday service, another church priest kept attacking other religions, Taoism, Buddhism......  

I was born in a problematic family.  I didn’t like this approach.  Whether other religions were bad or not, it wouldn’t make Christianity any better.  A religion good or bad is depend on itself; is depend on how its disciples behave; is depend on whether it could change its disciples better people or not.  It is not depend on how good it at attacking other religions.  


It was a rare chance allowed me to share my concern with a church priest with independent thinking, outside the church.  Plus after quite few weeks I’d not been there, he might have some interest to listen.  So I spoke a lot.

“Before last Wesak day, I told one of my Buddhist classmates, I planned to go to Brickfield and took some photos of the celebration.  She was astonished!  How can it be?  Even a Moslem government could appoint a Buddhist public holiday.  What makes a Christian Church close and narrow-minded like that?”


To my surprise, my priest told me, not only me, but also he and all other senior Church members held different position from that priest.  In the close-door Church meetings they had quarreled many times.  “He refuses to change.”  “It is hard like forcing a horse to drink water!”  “Siaojun, you hold we are too radical, but he says we are not radical enough!”  “What else could I do?”

I agree it is always hard to change people with quarreling.  After another party finds we are in an offensive position, he will hold a defensive position, or just cut off any tunnels for message to be delivered.  Anyway, I am glad to know not all Church members are that narrow-minded.  


I think a better solution, maybe just exercise the old psychology game, ‘learn to find others merit.’  Of course it is hard to ask him to find other religions merits on the first place, but can ask him start from share what he find other churches’ merits.  We go different churches and we have visit service every month, we can start from sharing what we could learn from them.  

Lastly we could not force what he shares in his sharing.  Nothing could stop we share what we have learnt from other religions in our sharing as well.

[ 本帖最后由 xbadx 于 12-10-2008 12:25 PM 编辑 ]