商业英语 祝贺信怎么写好？

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在西方文化中，得知朋友或工作伙伴订婚、结婚、生孩子、升职等，都习惯写一封简短的祝贺信件。繁忙的香港人或许觉得没有这样的必要，可能简单一个whatsapp讯息，已经十分足够。可是，精简的whatsapp讯息，又岂能与一封真诚的祝贺信或电邮相比？这星期透过一些实用句式及范本，看看如何写一封真诚、自然、亲切的祝贺信件，希望对阁下建立人际关系与巩固友好的商务合作，大有帮助。

＜实用句式＞

1. What exciting / thrilling / wonderful news!
多么令人振奋的／ 令人激动的／美妙的消息！

2. It’s the most joyful news I have heard for a long time!
这是我长期以来听到最愉快的消息！

3. I was delighted / thrilled / pleasantly surprised to hear the news.
听到这个消息，我很高兴／振奋／惊喜。

4. We were so excited to learn that…
我们兴奋地得知…

5. It gave me a great deal of pleasure to learn that…
我十分高兴地得知…

6. You have no idea what a thrill / kick / great pleasure I got when I heard that…
你可能不知道我听到这消息时是多么地激动／兴奋／高兴…

7. So you’ve done it! / got married! / been promoted!
好了，你终于完成了／结婚了／升职了！

8. So you and Johnny are engaged!
好，你和Johnny订婚了！

9. Congratulations on…
祝贺…

10. Warm/ sincere congratulations on…
衷心地祝贺…

11. Please accept my heartiest congratulations…
请接受我衷心的恭贺…

12. Allow me to congratulate you…
允许我向你恭贺…

13. We want you to know how happy we were…
告诉你，我们是多么高兴…

14. May I join in the chorus of congratulations…
我希望一同向你祝贺…

15. May an old friend congratulate you…
请让一位老朋友向你祝贺…

16. Congratulations and all best wishes!
恭喜你，并致以最好的祝愿！



范本1　＜祝贺朋友找到新工作＞

Dear Kelvin,

I was so thrilled to hear about your new position with HD Hong Kong. I understand that it has been a long search for the right position, but it seems that this is a perfect match for your skills and experience.

Having known and worked with you, I believe you are a smart and diligent worker and I am confident you will excel in your new position. Best of luck as you advance in your career and please keep me updated as to how things are going.

Yours sincerely,
Frankie



范本2 ＜祝贺生日电邮＞

Dear Mavis,

So you’re a year older today － or you don’t want to be reminded? Anyway, congratulations and best wishes.

If you feel like celebrating, allow me to take you to dinner and the movies as a sort of birthday treat. Just name a day. And in the meantime, many happy returns!

Cheers,
Frankie



范本3　＜祝贺升职＞

祝贺别人晋升时，不必过多寒暄，首段可以开门见山地恭喜收件人晋升，然后说明自己欣赏对方的工作和成就的肯定。在结尾可向对方送上祝福，并以此结束。

Dear Mable,

Congratulations on your recent promotion to Director of the Marketing Department of Human Design TW.

My fellow managers and I are delighted that your fine work has been recognized and we join in sending you our very best wishes for your new position.

Through cooperating with you for the past four years, we are well aware of how much you have contributed to the association between our two corporations. We are looking forward to your trip to Hong Kong after the Chinese New Year when we will celebrate your advancement in a more formal way.

Good luck with your new role and best wishes for continued success in your career.

Cordially yours,
Eva Chan
Marketing Director, Gene Keys HK





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