梁子 发表于 10-5-2013 07:44 PM 
你很厉害接，有什么有效的方法教我怎样接吗?(不肯能一个个问你吧。）
我想背的作文是这个，不知道可不可 ...
一般来说，我写的作文会分成三个部分。
开头、内容、结尾。
开头和结尾要开题目而定，而内容就是你背的作文。
如果你要用背作文的方式，最好用“回忆法”，就是把
开头~现在
内容~过去
结尾~回到现在或未来
如果出到开头的题目，你首先要把开头解决，解决的意就是设法把它变去句号，再连接回忆的段落（上面已经示范过了）
如果出到结尾的题目，你首先要把你的文章照着回忆法写出来，之后再用你被人打断回忆（someone broke my reverie），然后再联系回你的结尾。
记得：内容可以不用关系到题目（开头或结尾）
至于你这篇文章，正是用了我讲的回忆法的文章。
他的开头是：（现在）
This situation arises when any two vehicles moving on the road try to race each other or in traffic language tries to overtake each other. They try to overtake each other and that also at break-neck speed, little realizing that the road is a road and not a racing track. In Delhi where I live, an accident, and death on the road is a very common occurrence - and, there appears to be no remedy for it. In Delhi, the continuously growing traffic, the soaring population, and the multiple modes of transport both slow and fast move together, which is one basic cause of accidents. Besides this major hazard of Delhi roads, the complete lack of discipline also contributes to this tragic occurrence of accidents on the Delhi roads. 而回忆的段落是：（帮助你从现在接到以前）
Once, I have also been a witness of such a horrible accident that I just cannot forget even after so much time. It happened about two years back but still, even today the picture of the horror is vivid in my mind, and, so much so that at nights I wake up shouting aloud.
结尾的段落是：（现在）
When I woke up the next morning I found myself on my bed at home, with my parents beside me. My parents told me that, my address was found by the policemen, in my school diary and so, they had brought me home absolutely unconscious.I was told that, I had been unconscious for a good six hours, the shock had been so intense. When I remember that day and that incident even to-day, nervousness returns, and even now, I start wondering who those poor people could be, who had lost their lives at the altar of careless driving.
中间的内容是可以背的。
但是要注意一点就是你自己正在背什么，然后tense又没有出现错误。这个我是觉得tense有错误，建议你给老师帮你过目。
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