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回复 #336 XXYukikoXX 的帖子
是的是的 ~ 要有灵感才能写哦!
谢谢我可爱的妹妹先  |
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回复 #344 寻和守 的帖子
第一集终算好了
请多多指教哦,哥哥姐姐妹妹们  |
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楼主,我可以放情歌上去的吗??
[ 本帖最后由 凯元 于 6-7-2007 09:08 PM 编辑 ] |
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等着第二。。快快上  |
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发表于 6-7-2007 10:21 PM
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回复 #346 凯元 的帖子
可以哦~ 还要谢谢你
我一有灵感就写了...
[ 本帖最后由 寻和守 于 6-7-2007 10:23 PM 编辑 ] |
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发表于 6-7-2007 10:52 PM
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还不错!!有点好笑~~临死还会想到tiramisu!!
故事局情就留给你想吧!!我没写作天分!!! |
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发表于 6-7-2007 10:57 PM
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为什么歌放不上的??
All at once,
I finally took a moment and I'm realizing that
Your not coming back
And it finally hit me all at once
All at once,
I started counting teardrops and at least a million fell
My eyes began to swell,
And all my dreams were shattered all at once
Chorus:
Ever since I met you
You're the only love I've known
And I can't forget you
Though I must face it all alone
All at once, I'm drifting on a lonely sea
Wishing you'd come back to me
And that's all that matters now
All at once, I'm drifting on a lonely sea
Holding on to memories
And it hurts me more than you know
So much more than it shows
All at once
All at once,
I looked around and found that you were with another love
In someone else's arms,
And all my dreams were shattered, all at once
All at once
The smile that used to greet me brightened someone else's day
She took your smile away
And left me with just memories, all at once
[ 本帖最后由 凯元 于 6-7-2007 11:00 PM 编辑 ] |
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回复 #349 XXYukikoXX 的帖子
真的好笑吗? 如果是真的..那就成功前面了哦~
你还没睡吗? |
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发表于 6-7-2007 11:04 PM
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是咯~~ 有点搞笑~~ 以前就有提拉米酥了~~
还没~~那里有这样早睡!!
我8点半才醒~~
[ 本帖最后由 XXYukikoXX 于 6-7-2007 11:05 PM 编辑 ] |
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回复 #353 凯元 的帖子
哈哈你好恶心!! |
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回复 #352 XXYukikoXX 的帖子
接下来会难过...伤心...感动的...但是会很难写了
像.玲..那样睡法? 那你今晚作仙了  |
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回复 #355 凯元 的帖子
我建意你去看精神科~~
很试和你wor~~
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回复 #356 寻和守 的帖子
好期待你接下来的作品喔!!
我不会做仙的!!
因为我是猪!!哈哈 |
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回复 #359 XXYukikoXX 的帖子
接下来的作品你是说第二集..还是其它的?
第二集 "相信"
我有一点灵感了~
嘻嘻 |
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