能不能帮我改改这篇blog

xbadx

Easygoing

Very few people in Malaysia use Pentax camera.
1 of them just happened to live in SS15, xxx xxx, a very famous local photographer.
Last time he invited me to his home.
He told me he brought a 50/f1.4 lens to shoot his little child.
“But Pentax is very weak in indoor auto focus.
If you always lose focus, in what sense you choose a 50/f1.4?”


He smiled and handed me a photo book of his son.
Yap, just like what I guessed: when his son was moving, camera’s auto focus system often failed to react, hence most of pics were very blur.


“Children are like that, they do not like to keep quiet.
They like moving, like jump, to be naughty.” he commented, “but also is that the nature of the children?”


Suddenly I felt differently and checked those photos again: he was quite right.
Those unfocused pics represented the naught and happy very well.
Follow his guide, I also took my camera and tried to take some indoor pics of the little creature.
While I was metering and shooting, more and more I could sense his son was different.
From less demanded, good understanding, less straight, easygoing parents, the child were more like to smile, more naught, more like to take adventure and more sunshine.

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大意是我遇到一个本地的知名摄影师, 他拍自己的儿子的照片很多都是模糊的
我感到很奇怪, 他告诉我说, 小孩本来就是爱乱动乱跑, 这才是小孩子的天性啊

我于是很受启发........感叹小孩子有这样好的父母, 真是幸福

rioj

Easygoing

Very few people in Malaysia use Pentax-brand camera.
One of them just happens to be a very famous local photographer, xxxx, who lives in SS15.
Once, he invited me to his home. He told me he bought a 50/f1.4 lens to shoot his son.
I questioned him “But Pentax is very weak in indoor auto focus.
what makes you choose a 50/f1.4 if it loses focus all the time?”


He smiled and handed me a photo album of his son. Yap, just like what I expected: camera’s auto focus system failed miserably to react to his son’s movements, as a result most of pics were very blurry.


“Children are like that, they do not like to keep still. They like to move around, jump, to be naughty.” he commented, “ isn’t that the nature of children?”


As though those words were a revelation, I checked out those photos again. He was quite right, those unfocussed photos did present the carefree nature and innocence of kids pretty well .
Taking a cue from him, I also took my camera and try to take some indoor pictures of the  child.
While I was metering and shooting, I saw things in a different light and appreciated his son's uniqueness. From an easy going and accommodating family, a child is more likely to smile,  be more adventurous and be oneself.



试试改了，使其句子比较通顺。莫些字眼有重复的意思，就删除了。

[ 本帖最后由 rioj 于 22-9-2007 11:26 PM 编辑 ]

xbadx

last paragraph is really better, good, thanks

rioj

只是加了一些助词，以达到作者想要表达的意思。还是保留作者90%的原文吧，总不能改到面目全非。

xbadx

再次重新温习，改得真是比我写的好多了