大家可以帮我改吗？？我很多grammar不对了。。

企鹅88

Do you understand what meaning of LOVE? L is listening, to listen each other without prejudice to the requirements, and to assist. O is Obligate. Love need a lot of thanksgiving, give more love, irrigated the seed of the love. V is valued (respect). Love is show your respect for the expressing of caring and sincere encouragement. E is Excuse. Love is the kind of treatment, forgive other’s mistakes, accept all of each other.
The meaning of love is so deep, we only can listen their voice at we heart to feel their heartbeat, then can stationed in their heart. With a thankful heart, face to each other and life, you will enjoy the happiness of love. Respect each other means respect ourselves, then your life will be broad-minded. Forgive each other and accommodating each other, your love will be far-reaching.
We want a long love, we must always learn listen to each other, thank to each other respect for each other and forgive the each other.

amely

We want a long love---we need a long relationship

so many the words that using "mean"--if could,change it with those linking words,such as in addtion,beside that,moreover...etc

ayamitik

Do you understand what IS THE meaning of LOVE? L is listening, to listen each other without prejudice to the requirements, and to assist. O is Obligate. Love needS a lotS of thanksgiving, give more love, irrigated the seed of love. V is valued (respect). Love  showS your respect for the express of caring and sincere encouragement. E is Excuse. Love is A kind of treatment, forgive other’s mistakes, accept all of each other.
The meaning of love is so deep, we  can ONLY listen their voice at OUR heart to feel their heartbeat, then can stationeD in their heart. With a thankful heart, face to each other and life, you will enjoy the happiness of love. Respect each other means respect ourselves, then your life will be broad-minded. Forgive each other and accommodatE each other, your love will be far-reaching.
We want a long love, we must always learn TO listen to each other, thank to each other respect for each other and forgive the each other.

rneo123

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  &#160oor in Grammar.  Need to go back to basic English lesson. A lot to catch up. 要多多用功.